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Dowry Denied, Destiny Rewritten

Dowry Denied, Destiny Rewritten

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The air in the Las Vegas hotel choked with stale champagne and failure. My fiancé, Mark, slumped at the poker table, surrounded by his smirking cousins, Kevin and Brian. A fortune in chips piled before them. Mark' s pile was empty. My heart sank when Kevin announced the amount: "One hundred and eighty thousand dollars." That was my dowry, a fund for our future, our new home. Mark' s mother, Brenda, cornered me, her voice sharp. "You need to fix this, Sarah. It' s a family debt. You have the money. Pay it." My blood ran cold. She wanted my dowry to cover a reckless gambling debt. Mark wouldn' t even look at me, a pathetic man playing for sympathy. "Brenda, that' s... that' s everything we have," I stammered. "What kind of life will you have if your husband is in debt to his own family?" she countered. "Pay it, Sarah. It' s the only way." I looked at Mark, begging him with my eyes to defend us. He just shook his head, a weak gesture of defeat. The pressure was crushing, a trap closing in. My hand trembled as I reached for my purse, numb with shock and a twisted sense of duty. Then, a line of text shimmered in the air, a translucent pop-up. "Kevin and Brian are exchanging triumphant glances. They are predators who just cornered their prey." I blinked, shaking my head, but it was still there. Then another: "Brenda' s eyes are fixed on your purse, gleaming with anticipation, like a hawk watching a mouse." The fog in my brain cleared. This wasn' t tragic loss. This was a performance. A carefully planned scam to steal my money. Seven years of love, crumbling in an instant. The man I was to marry was a conspirator, his mother the mastermind. The devastation felt physical, but a cold, hard anger began to rise. They thought I was a fool. They were wrong. My hand became perfectly steady. I took a deep breath, the air tasting of betrayal. "No," I said, the single word cutting through the tension.

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Introduction

The air in the Las Vegas hotel choked with stale champagne and failure.

My fiancé, Mark, slumped at the poker table, surrounded by his smirking cousins, Kevin and Brian.

A fortune in chips piled before them. Mark' s pile was empty.

My heart sank when Kevin announced the amount: "One hundred and eighty thousand dollars."

That was my dowry, a fund for our future, our new home.

Mark' s mother, Brenda, cornered me, her voice sharp. "You need to fix this, Sarah. It' s a family debt. You have the money. Pay it."

My blood ran cold. She wanted my dowry to cover a reckless gambling debt.

Mark wouldn' t even look at me, a pathetic man playing for sympathy.

"Brenda, that' s... that' s everything we have," I stammered.

"What kind of life will you have if your husband is in debt to his own family?" she countered. "Pay it, Sarah. It' s the only way."

I looked at Mark, begging him with my eyes to defend us. He just shook his head, a weak gesture of defeat.

The pressure was crushing, a trap closing in. My hand trembled as I reached for my purse, numb with shock and a twisted sense of duty.

Then, a line of text shimmered in the air, a translucent pop-up.

"Kevin and Brian are exchanging triumphant glances. They are predators who just cornered their prey."

I blinked, shaking my head, but it was still there.

Then another: "Brenda' s eyes are fixed on your purse, gleaming with anticipation, like a hawk watching a mouse."

The fog in my brain cleared. This wasn' t tragic loss. This was a performance. A carefully planned scam to steal my money.

Seven years of love, crumbling in an instant. The man I was to marry was a conspirator, his mother the mastermind.

The devastation felt physical, but a cold, hard anger began to rise.

They thought I was a fool. They were wrong.

My hand became perfectly steady. I took a deep breath, the air tasting of betrayal.

"No," I said, the single word cutting through the tension.

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Introduction
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Chapter 1
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Chapter 2
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Chapter 3
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Chapter 4
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Chapter 5
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Chapter 6
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Chapter 7
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Chapter 8
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Chapter 9
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Chapter 10
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